Tuesday, November 15, 2011
About the TEDtalk
I'm in the process of working on my TED talk and I know what I want to say, but when it comes to creating a script the words don't come out. I've talked to Jeremy and he had some great ideas for me to do it about but I forgot those idea! I've sent him my script so that he can revise it and write down the ideas he had for me to do my project about. I want to focus on showing the kids that its not all about winning and that they need to go out and have fun. That there is no need for them to jump to violence if they are losing and if they are winning they need to not be cocky. I don't know how to write that though. Give me some ideas guys, please.
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Why don't you just try talking it out with someone, and videotape the conversation?
ReplyDeleteWell I think you should write it like if it was a speech. The reason I say this is because it will help your script be more alive. Well this is kinda of how I did mine and made it easy for to do it this way. Also you might want t write it like in an essay format in which you make your paragraphs different main points about why people should not be cocky. I think the important thing is that you take that first step into actually transmitting what you wan to say to the public.
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